When I was young, I have had always a big fear of going to the bathroom in my room. The reason that I was scared to go to my own bathroom was because the bathroom's in my house are really dark and I am not a big fan of dark places. When ever I needed to go to the bathroom when it was still daylight I would leave the bathroom door open in my room but if it was at night then I would ask someone to come with me and stand outside my bathroom.
I have a older brother which is about sixteen now. He would always embarass me in front people by saying '' aatiqah is scared to go to her own bathroom she always asks someone to come stand outside her bathroom''. I told him to stop doing that but as usual he wouldn't stop. So one day what I told him was " just keep watching I will never be scared to go my own or any other bathroom again". I was actually not scared to go to my bathroom ever again. My brother said " ok you are not scared to go to the bathroom anymore you have got a lot of courage".
Since I am eleven now I am not at all scared to go to my bathroom even though there was daylight or it was night time. Remember all of this that happened was when I was about eight to nine yesrs old. That was how I showed courage to everyone.
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that was a good blog on corage the only thing i recomendis that you make your font bigger
ReplyDeleteI liked the way how you had big font and black background with light blue color font because it was very clear to see. But some orders of the word are incorrect like, "I have had always a big fear...." It would have been a bit better if you said, "I always had a big fear....." But I love the way how you added question in your first paragraph because not that many people put their question on but you did.By the way I also love the picture that you put on but next time put the email in!! :)
ReplyDeleteInteresting blog, even now going to the bathroom at night gives me a fright, you just had one misspelled word which was watchimg. Keep up the good work
ReplyDeleteCool Blog, you have a couple of misspelled words. I really liked the way you put the question in your first paragraph. Not many people do that. I like the design of your blog. -Claire
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Aatiqah,
ReplyDeleteyour blog is good. Your sentence structure is pretty bad.Like on the 2nd last paragraph, the first sentence. "I have a older brother WHICH is about sixteen now.The WHICH should be who. Also you change your time a lot. First in your sentence its present, then it suddenly turned into past tense. Overall it was okay.
-Zarafsha